Well lets see here... I was planning to do a fan comic for a while but my drawing skills are not that good so I practiced and practiced and practice and people have been giving me good feed back. I thought I would share this first page with you all and tell me what you all think. Any sort of feedback will be nice and what I can improve. Reason why I did this? I couldn't sleep so at 4 in the morning I made a BIG pot of coffee, grabbed a cup of oats and sat down and got to work. Munched down, did planning, drank coffee and came up with the first page. There is not much so I guess you can consider it an intro before I continue. So I need anyone and everyones opinion of what you all think. The file is too big so I will link it to my FA account where I have it uploaded. I will get a deviant account soon if all goes well.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4032401*fingers crossed* I hope I did alright... scanners suck for getting the detail.